Friday, October 9, 2009

Without a Shadow of Doubt


Collaborated by : AmandaLyn and Paula


All aboard, find a seat
Watch and learn
He won’t be beat
Expert in the craft of pity
With tales of woe, downtrod and gritty
that feed a paranoia profound
with vanity he's surly found
Search for intentions, interpreted wrong
he sits, sulking, with face so long
Scraps of dignity, shards of pride
in desperation, cast aside
looking for validity
Yes, please do
pity me

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thanks, Paula, for letting me share the space with you!!

AmandaLyn

Paula and Elwood's Poetic Palace said...

It's an honor for me.
I am blessed to be surrounded by much talent. You and Elwood have made this a home

Dimps said...

Search for intentions, interpreted wrong
he sits, sulking, with face so long

Wonderful....
These lines are the best!
Regards,
Dimple

Paula and Elwood's Poetic Palace said...

Thank you so much Dimps for your comments. I appreciate that you take the time to read and let me know that you've enjoyed what you read here.