Monday, June 15, 2009

I looked for you Today

I looked for you today
you went away

Not far from thought,
nor from the heart
but gone from sight

I still recall
your final night
I said goodbye

Then sat and cried

Remembering now

You have died


Anonymous said...

After ten years, I still do this, still forget, still look, still hear his laugh and see his smile. It gets easier, I promise, and those moments when you know he is right there with you will be ones that you treasure and look forward to. (((hugs)))

Bea Sempere said...

I love this poem. Hugs to you my friend. Remember he'll always be there.

Paula and Elwood's Poetic Palace said...

Thank you Ladies
I know he is right here.. he will always be , right here. It's just hard sometimes. The writing helps. My friends kind support, helps.

Hugs to you as well


Dimps said...


Sometimes, I really feel short of words...
And, today after reading this creation I felt it the most!

One of the most beautiful and crisp creations I have ever come across. I forwarded this poem to one of my friend as well. And she also felt the same!

Hats off!


Paula and Elwood's Poetic Palace said...


Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad that my work has made you "feel" .. I am honored that it moved you to leave your thoughts for me.

I wish a peaceful day to you