Monday, June 15, 2009

I looked for you Today


I looked for you today
Forgetting,
you went away


Not far from thought,
nor from the heart
but gone from sight

I still recall
your final night
I said goodbye

Then sat and cried

Remembering now

You have died

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

After ten years, I still do this, still forget, still look, still hear his laugh and see his smile. It gets easier, I promise, and those moments when you know he is right there with you will be ones that you treasure and look forward to. (((hugs)))

Bea Sempere said...

I love this poem. Hugs to you my friend. Remember he'll always be there.

Paula and Elwood's Poetic Palace said...

Thank you Ladies
I know he is right here.. he will always be , right here. It's just hard sometimes. The writing helps. My friends kind support, helps.

Hugs to you as well

Paula

Dimps said...

Hello,

Sometimes, I really feel short of words...
And, today after reading this creation I felt it the most!

One of the most beautiful and crisp creations I have ever come across. I forwarded this poem to one of my friend as well. And she also felt the same!

Hats off!

Regards,
Dimple
http://poemshub.blogspot.com

Paula and Elwood's Poetic Palace said...

Dimple

Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad that my work has made you "feel" .. I am honored that it moved you to leave your thoughts for me.

I wish a peaceful day to you


Paula