Tuesday, February 3, 2009

In Love They Plied Secret Space

Collaborated by Elwood and Paula

A hum, a strum
nestled nicely against
the tender valley

Freely flowing, floral bouquet
applause apparent upon
linguistical lover

sugar plumbed plummeting
sweet sparkle dust
on certain spots
in certain twats
no thought required
to fill such desire

natural in nature
gentle oblige,
moans , whimpers, follow
in stride

in love they plied
secret space
a lull in time
to feed the mind
not starve such soft
yet tender stride


Ana said...

Absolutetly beautiful, this is perfect. :) My heart fills with brightness as I read this enchanting language, and understand it's contextual momentum.

Paula and Elwood's Poetic Palace said...

Thank you Ana
Your kind comments mean so much.

I am thrilled you "felt" it.

AmandaLyn said...

again, the first line sets the tone. This is a loving serenade that gently caresses and carries the reader to a warm and wonderful place.

Paula and Elwood's Poetic Palace said...

Aw, thanks Amandalyn
You know Elwood well enough to know that as intense as he can be, writing with him just works.. and the results always amaze.