Long ago I was full of wisdom
My knowledge was sought
Hours burned with idle chatter
Laughter, tears
Memories, solutions
Many years later
I am cast aside
Old , useless
Unworthy of your time
The loss
My knowledge was sought
Hours burned with idle chatter
Laughter, tears
Memories, solutions
Many years later
I am cast aside
Old , useless
Unworthy of your time
The loss
is yours
4 comments:
wonderfully to the point. The ending "the loss (space)is yours" strikes to the emotional blend I felt. :)
You felt it the way I intended
for me, that means a lot.
Thank you, Frederick, I do appreciate your thoughts.
Paula
damn straight its their loss! Loved this!
I am glad you dropped by, did some reading and loved what you read.
I appreciate your kind words..
Paula
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